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Ryan Dreyer's avatar

This was AWESOME!! The internal dialogue and quotes made the mental struggle of the character so tangible. Also hilarious to read you write the exact opposite of how you view life. I love the details of the exit numbers and the subtle suggestion of the mileage left after being cutoff. Amazing 🔥🔥🔥

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Jordan B. Goldstein's avatar

Thank you

I used to live a life kind of like that so it’s always at the forefront of my mind how ‘not to live’

Sometimes the quote that inspires you is meant to drive you in the opposite direction

Appreciate you catching some of those subtle cues on how the character views everything in his life as the ‘victim’ until he remembers his passion!

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